tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3385214258089856439.post5195691217878403626..comments2023-04-11T07:06:40.308-07:00Comments on And so it goes: Nano excerpt #3KeliaMeganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3385214258089856439.post-17625948352515926072012-06-11T16:30:08.605-07:002012-06-11T16:30:08.605-07:00Thanks! It's probably a bit random for the rea...Thanks! It's probably a bit random for the reader, but they'll figure it out. <br /><br />That sounds fun! Good way to do that, I'm always stuck wondering how to fit in random pieces of backstory :P<br /><br />I can't decide either, but I think it might be the weirdness of me switching from first person to third so quickly (since I was writing really fast). I'm never as comfortable in third person, and it doesn't have much character especially here. I'll have to think about it :)KeliaMeganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11943536028984842299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3385214258089856439.post-28914382403501500282012-06-11T16:19:11.594-07:002012-06-11T16:19:11.594-07:00The idea of starting every chapter with a snippet ...The idea of starting every chapter with a snippet from another story...I like it! It is a very unique idea; I especially like that the two story tie in later. It leaves me wondering what is to come and how it relates!<br /><br /> I have a novel where I started every chapter with a memory (which provided important background for characters and the story). It was actually kind of fun writing something differently!<br /><br />There is something off about it. I've been trying to decide what it is, because I honestly like the concept of the piece and parts of the way it is written...but something is missing! With some editing, I definitely think it could be pretty awesome. Maybe some revision and you'd like it better?Miss Katiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10847762707432110245noreply@blogger.com